All of you have turned in a significant piece of original poetry (along with 3+ rough drafts) this past week.
With that in mind, I’d like for you to share part of this poem with the rest of us…plus offer all of us a few elements that you’d still like to improve if you could continue with the drafting process.
- Copy/paste ONE stanza from your final poem into your comment here. It is up to you which stanza you share. If, however, you are not sure which stanza to share, pick the 1st one (that focused specifically on the scene in nature).
- Identify (5) things you’d like to improve or continue revising about this specific stanza. Be specific in how you explain what you mean.